Monday, January 12, 2009

Don't you Remember?


Did I not tell you after I loved?

Did I not tell you after I vowed?

If I ensue to roar being wretched

I might die, don’t you remember?




All the love I wanted back then bestowed

Fall never being jaded of the care showed

Mould the fortitude in the way the dearest adored

Whole days and nights devoted in love bowed

Notified that if I ensue to roar life being towed

I might die, don’t you remember?




Calls of affection made not to let deep

Walls of supremacy blamed away to keep

Sole in despair yet when lonesome a lot weep

All in the heart remembering the love given leap

Notified that if I ensue to roar life being towed

I might die, don’t you remember?

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well these poems are great

Anonymous said...

varah great pattern eh hureei mie poems thaaakughae

Deadfella said...

Thank you for comments, but i must say i am just a learner. These are my practical i post on the blog. Thanks for all comments

Anonymous said...

these are goood.. but you can do better...
the endings of each... it kinda disturbs me... plus dont feel that connected to it...